English 9 (B)

Revisions

As you've been completing the steps of the essay, you have been given feedback. Have you taken these points seriously and worked to implement them into your essay? Have you also considered what you own thinking suggests will improve your paper?

Please check to see if your instructor has given you feedback in the "Notes" for any of the essay assignments. To do this, you should go into your Grades and look in the Essay Category; then click on the R&J essay assignments. See if any "Notes" were left. Also consider what you can learn from the peer or self evaluation of your essay.

Now decide what you can still do to improve your essay; the next assessment will ask you to answer this specifically.